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Final! (..final1, at least)

 final1

This is the final image of my personal still project. after some feedback i got on forums :

it was mentioned adding a character, .. but characters are an issue : being an env artist, that’s what i focus on . When i tried to have chars in my last personal still .. they weren’t at the same level as the hard-surface parts, and i don’t want people to be distracted by a bad skin shader or similar..

So i thought , if not chars .. at least some storytelling element would help , i came up with the idea of the cordon.. (like a crime scene, or a contagion zone .. ) it’s just a minor element but adds some plot , as well as just phyisically filling some space in the road area , and ,as for composition , it mirrors the curve of the arch above.

The other update is i’ve added displacement to the foreground bricks … being those so close up, makes a nice difference to have the detailed silhouette and better shading… (and it wasn’t much work , i just added some subd, a displace modifier an used weight paint to tweak intensity in different areas)

Latest feedback i got -just after publishing as final on BA, argh! :) – was a mock-up for better composition and perspective. A great suggestion .. especially considering i’m still bothered that my last big personal project was precisely too simmetrical in composition .  I think i’ll keep it this way and wrap up, but , i’ll remember that , check the mockup at CGS forums, quite interesting :

http://forums.cgsociety.org/showthread.php?p=7661133

Diffcol pass and wireframe :

final-wire+AO final-difcol

Video ‘post mortem’ project analysis :

cover

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=doJq8m6emsI

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7nwmHoS_0xk

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3 responses

  1. It’s so freaking awesome! Looks sweet as, I don’t know how you can make it prettier xD looks perfect to me :p

    September 20, 2013 at 11:44 am

  2. The second last youtube link’s text is correct, but it links to the same video as the last one :)

    October 2, 2013 at 9:23 am

    • Ah , yes .. right text wrong link, fixed , thanks !

      October 2, 2013 at 11:39 am

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